the diagram shows how an office building looks at the present and the plan for its future development
The map demonstrates the present looks of an office building and how it will be constructed during next coming years.
As can be seen in the graph that there are two grasslands just next to the right and left sides of this building respectively, and its only entrance is closed to the right side’s grass. When you enter it, you will first see there is a reception desk in front of the entrance where the bathroom is right behind it. Walking into the hall and turn right, you will see the hall are divided into two parts by a corridor. One in the entrance’s side is the office area, where is made of four office rooms. In the opposite side, the kitchen, a canteen and a stockroom just right over there which is very convenient for the staffs.
It is easily noticed that there are some changes in the future plan. The two grasslands both disappeared and the right one was designed as outside activity area where all the staffs can relax there after work, while the left one will be constructed as the tea room and the meeting area where there will be some coffee machines, chairs, and tables there. What is more, the entrance and also the reception desk will be moved to the middle place of the building. Therefore, the bathroom is canceled and the original four-office-room areas are changed into two big offices which are on the two sides of the entrance. Moreover, the kitchen and the canteen are also planned as office rooms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 192, Rule ID: EN_COMPOUNDS
Message: This word is normally spelled as one.
Suggestion: thereafter
...ity area where all the staffs can relax there after work, while the left one will be constr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, look, moreover, so, therefore, while, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 7.0 300% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 1.00243902439 798% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 11.0 6.8 162% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.15609756098 285% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 11.0 5.60731707317 196% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 965.302439024 122% => OK
No of words: 258.0 196.424390244 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.58139534884 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 3.73543355544 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47732339068 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 131.0 106.607317073 123% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507751937984 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 367.2 283.868780488 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.07073170732 280% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.287226336 43.030603864 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 107.454545455 112.824112599 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 22.9334400587 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.72727272727 5.23603664747 109% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160184754053 0.215688989381 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0734293819922 0.103423049105 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0729138810645 0.0843802449381 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14343831169 0.15604864568 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0849629321492 0.0819641961636 104% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.2329268293 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 61.2550243902 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.58 11.4140731707 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.35 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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