It is an obvious truth that majority of people are inclined to utilize their own cars rather than public transportation including bus, taxis and so forth so on. Surly, there are some reasons behind this attitude and absolutely the government can organize some schemes in order to persuade people to use public transportation more. This essay will state the reason in related to using private cars and the items that must be considered for dealing this problem.
On the one hand, having private transports can benefit people a lot. As it is extremely fast, a great deal of time and energy can be saved through using them in comparison to public transport. For example, you are going to go to a significant session and is impossible for you in order to wait for a taxi or bus to arrive you. So, it seems like a perfect idea to have your own car. In addition, it is more convenient as well. Suppose you are going to have a trip to a remote area, private cars give you this opportunity to take a rest and have more fun during the way. It is an advantage that can not be taken via public vehicles. Therefore, that is why more people are eager to have their own car.
On the other hand, as everybody knows, using private cars are associated with a huge number of issues and government has the most crucial role in persuading people for using public transport. There are numerous steps that can be taken before everything get worst. First and foremost is related to providing more convenient and faster buses or taxis that can lead to using more public transportation among people. An alternative approach is imposing more tax and fewer facilities like parking place for private cars..
In conclusion, people are more willing to use their own car because of being more fast and convenient. However, people can take a lot of advantages from their own car the downside of that must not be neglected. So, government should consider some solutions such as providing the best facilities and imposing more tax for people who use their private car in situations which are possible to use buses or taxis.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, so, therefore, well, for example, in addition, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 13.1623246493 175% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1732.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 369.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.69376693767 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38284983912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56582182955 2.80592935109 91% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.493224932249 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.9 506.74238477 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.2853468533 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.2222222222 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.464648013627 0.244688304435 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147193790945 0.084324248473 175% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0604021415423 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.3034427147 0.151304729494 201% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0275666865818 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 50.2224549098 119% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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