Some people say that now we can see films on our phones or tablets there is no need to go to the cinema. Others say that to be fully enjoyed, films, need to be seen in a cinema.
Many viewers of cinema believe that we should see films on cell phones or laptops and we do not need to go to the cinema, whereas others argue about it and say that we need to go the cinema to get satisfied pleasure from a film. This essay discusses both opinions by demonstrating points, and then I give my own opinion.
The main reason, why people should watch films on smartphones is because cell phones are very mobile and could be used everywhere. Furthermore, cell phones have full HD displays and systems of high-quality sounds so they can show the high-quality picture, which does not concede to the cinema one. Also, you can watch a film in any time and any place, so you can go everywhere and enjoy watching movies.
On another hand, the cinema should not be ignored by using smartphones because the cinema can provide the exclusive atmosphere of the film. The environment is achieved due to the fact that a multiplex has a lot of space in the hall and a vast screen, which has size around a whole wall. Also in the cinema room, you will be provided with comfortable chairs, and the movie does not have advertisements. Moreover, a multiplex can present you a possibility to watch the film in 3D.
In conclusion, both of the methods have their advantages and should be considered. But in my opinion, cell phones are better because you are not tied with the place you can press pause the film and watch it letter then you will have more time.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 411, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Message: Did you mean 'letters'?
Suggestion: letters
...u can press pause the film and watch it letter then you will have more time.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, moreover, so, then, whereas, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 15.0 7.85571142285 191% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1194.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5572519084 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57061564573 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.541984732824 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 376.2 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.261288775 49.4020404114 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.545454545 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8181818182 20.7667163134 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.36363636364 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302087599465 0.244688304435 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105917671902 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.109395943042 0.0667982634062 164% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.183103794317 0.151304729494 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0958272672613 0.056905535591 168% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.0 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.05 50.2224549098 130% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 12.4159519038 76% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 78.4519038076 59% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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