The pie-graph illustrates a percentage of the populations separated by 3 different age groups in 2000 and 2050 in two countries: namely, Yemen and Italy. Overall, the Yemen and Italian population aged from 15 to 59 year were the most sizeable group in both two years, except for the graph of 2000 year in Yemen where the population aged between 0 to 14 years was the highest.
Looking first at the trend for the Yemen populations, accounting for the highest at 50 % in 2000, the percentage of the populations aged between 0 to 14 years predicted to decrease by over 13 % to 37 % in 2050. On the other hand, the percentage of 15 to 59-year population forcasted to witness an increased from 46.3 % to 57.3 %. Ultimately, there was a prediction of a slight growth of the senior population(60+ years) by about 2 % from 2000 to 2050.
Turning to the next data about Italian population, before predicting to decline about 15 % in 2050, the Italian population aged between 15 to 59 years was responsible for over 61 % in 2000. In contrast, the population with ages 60 or higher estimated to double from 24.1 % to 42.3 % whereas the youth populations (0-14 years) predicted to go down by approximately 2 %.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, look, whereas, except for, in contrast, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 33.7804878049 157% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 985.0 965.302439024 102% => OK
No of words: 207.0 196.424390244 105% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75845410628 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79308509922 3.73543355544 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90391610184 2.65546596893 109% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 106.607317073 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531400966184 0.547539520022 97% => OK
syllable_count: 279.0 283.868780488 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 22.4926829268 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.1532891031 43.030603864 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 140.714285714 112.824112599 125% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.5714285714 22.9334400587 129% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.71428571429 5.23603664747 186% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192680001616 0.215688989381 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105553490218 0.103423049105 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0496379455977 0.0843802449381 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151762892498 0.15604864568 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0350024802017 0.0819641961636 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.42 61.2550243902 110% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.06136585366 100% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 40.7170731707 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 11.4329268293 166% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.9970731707 124% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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