Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?The ability to maintain friendships with a small number of people over a long period of time is more important for happiness than the ability to make many new friends easily.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer.
Friendship comprises a lot of meaning. It’s respecting, understandings, and supporting specially in hard situations that the person face during his life conflicts. However, the question is which group of friends brings happiness more than the other one. As many people believe many friends bring more happiness to person rather than less. I personally believe small group of friends bring more happiness to person than large group for many reasons.
First of all, small and over long period friends will understand my feelings even before I say anything and will in turn, respect my decisions .My one old experience during my school years is a good example for this. I have a close 3 friends, they are like my sisters since I have none and I pass through a hardest situation in my family when my dearest close friend ( grandfather ) pass away in this year. I felt in a situation of sadness and didn't go to the school for one week and decided to never go again as my grandfather who is a writer was always support my education and hold my hands. However,
my friends was a big support for me and they helped me to get out again to life and enjoy it when they respect my decision at first and accept it but what they did later, they convince me step by step that my grandfather will be much happier in his haven to see me successful person in my education.
In addition, with small group of friends we can soothing to manage our time together like if we decided to go a picnic we can easily do that because we have the same interests and almost same hobbies rather than big group which each one want to go to different place and enjoy his own and personal activity without take in considerations for others interesting.
In sum, although some people believe large group will bring much happiness as they will get enjoy their times more. But, I personally believe small, long period group of friends is more bringing to enjoyment because for their understanding and respecting as well as, easy manage our out time together.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, so, well, in addition, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 15.1003584229 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 9.8082437276 71% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.0286738351 73% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 49.0 43.0788530466 114% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1671.0 1977.66487455 84% => OK
No of words: 359.0 407.700716846 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65459610028 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.48103885553 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56746252404 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 212.727598566 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.506963788301 0.524837075471 97% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 618.680645161 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.51630824373 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.59856630824 83% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.51792114695 57% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.86738351254 54% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.6003584229 58% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.1344086022 144% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 90.8830139367 48.9658058833 186% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.25 100.406767564 139% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.9166666667 20.6045352989 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.45110844103 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.5376344086 163% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 11.8709677419 93% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.88709677419 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160458360419 0.236089414692 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0787725798952 0.076458572812 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0602485539078 0.0737576698707 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0952011554481 0.150856017488 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0581402085108 0.0645574589148 90% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.4 11.7677419355 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.96 58.1214874552 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.2 10.1575268817 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.28 10.9000537634 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.41 8.01818996416 92% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 86.8835125448 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.002688172 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.0537634409 135% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.247311828 78% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 68.3333333333 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 20.5 Out of 30
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