you have moved to new house and are planning to hold a party worried about the noises may disturb your neighbors
Write a letter to neighbor
Introduce yourself
Plans of party
Invite him
Dear Mark,
Hope this letter finds you in the best of your health. My name is Thanom and I am a dentist by profession practising at the government hospital of Uganda. I have recently moved into the house next to yours as I purchased it from the previous owner since it is located in a plush locality. I like the modern architecture of house blended with the peaceful neighbourhood.
Since I have just shifted in so I am planning to host a housewarming party on Saturday. The barbeque party will start around 7 pm in my beautiful garden in the backyard of the house. We will also be joined by some local musicians who will entertain us with their latest hits.
I would like to invite you to this party moreover I believe this will be the right occasion to meet and greet especially when I am new to this locality. I am sure you will enjoy this party and we will have lots of fun.
I look forward to seeing you this Saturday.
Warm wishes
Daniel
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mark, Hope this letter finds you in the best o...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...party and we will have lots of fun. I look forward to seeing you this Saturda...
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Line 9, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... seeing you this Saturday. Warm wishes Daniel
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 780.0 937.175257732 83% => OK
No of words: 177.0 206.0 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.40677966102 4.54256449028 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64748333727 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55064567402 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 107.0 127.690721649 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.604519774011 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 243.9 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.4967115227 44.8134815571 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 70.9090909091 76.5299724578 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0909090909 16.8248392259 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.54545454545 4.34317383033 59% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164481616618 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0602837749314 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0480655709559 0.0603063233224 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0936807744636 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0396263868593 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.4 8.37731958763 88% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.0 8.71597938144 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 41.2886597938 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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