You bought a music concert ticket. However, you are unable to go. So you offer the ticket to your friend.
Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• Explain detailed the concert.
• Why you are unable to go
• How can your friend receive the ticket.
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to offer you the tickets for a music concert as I am unable to attend. Let me explain in detail.
As you are aware that the rock band “Metallica” is coming to our town for a musical concert next week. The event will happen at JNU stadium on Thursday. Although it is a full day event however I suggest you to go at 6 pm as the actual concert will start at that time. As you are aware that I am a die-hard fan of the band therefore I had bought a premium ticket in advance however due to work exigencies I am unable to attend the concert. To elucidate I would be travelling overseas to Japan for a product launch.
Hence I would like to offer the concert ticket to you. Since you too are a big fan of the Metallica and were looking forward to attend this event. The ticket will allow you to access premium lounge from where you can have a clear view of the artists performing on the stage additionally drinks and food will be served with no additional cost. Lastly I will email the tickets to you by tomorrow on your personal email address.
I look forward to your reply and hope you enjoy the concert.
Regards
Said
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Mike, Hope you are doing well. I am writing th...
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Line 4, column 525, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...overseas to Japan for a product launch. Hence I would like to offer the concert ...
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Line 6, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...eas to Japan for a product launch. Hence I would like to offer the concert ticke...
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Line 6, column 126, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to attending'.
Suggestion: to attending
... the Metallica and were looking forward to attend this event. The ticket will allow you t...
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Line 8, column 8, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nd hope you enjoy the concert. Regards Said
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, however, lastly, look, so, therefore, well, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 32.9175257732 94% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 26.3917525773 114% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 974.0 937.175257732 104% => OK
No of words: 226.0 206.0 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.30973451327 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51018755974 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 126.0 127.690721649 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557522123894 0.622605031667 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 307.8 290.88556701 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 4.0 1.83505154639 218% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 49.9748916549 44.8134815571 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.9230769231 76.5299724578 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3846153846 16.8248392259 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.30769230769 4.34317383033 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.398708243096 0.216113520407 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.131325835372 0.0766984524023 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985410872994 0.0603063233224 163% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.26469911167 0.12726935374 208% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0503085020023 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.42 8.71597938144 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.