In many cities today, most people live in large apartment block. Does this kind of accommodation have more advantages than disadvantages?
Over the past few years, we have seen a considerable growing tendency for people to live in a large apartment block along with the uncontrolled growth of cities. However, in my opinion, the drawbacks of living in this type of house far outweigh its benefits.
To begin with, it is an indisputable fact that living in an apartment can help people to reduce financial pressure. It is generally agreed that renting or buying an apartment is usually less expensive than renting or building a house. In addition, apartment blocks are often located near the central area, as a result, living in this kind of accommodation provides people with plenty of accessibilities to more variety of entertainments, better education opportunities and health services.
On the other hand, when living in apartments, people have been suffered from restricted spaces that can limit their lifestyles. For example, most residential buildings do not allow apartment owners to keep pets at home because of hygiene regulations. This example illustrates that people are not able to do everything they want even in their own home when living in a big apartment block. Another problem comes from the neighbourhood which can be extremely annoying sometimes. For instance, when the boy next door is having a big party and the music is too loud that you can not sleep, what will you do if he refuses to turn down the volume? People are not capable to avoid encountering such issues in their daily lives.
In conclusion, it seems to me that the disadvantages of living in the apartment are more significant than its advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, so, for example, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05263157895 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93919574291 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.62030075188 0.561755894193 110% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.4790837236 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.0 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1666666667 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.75 7.06120827912 166% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.324701242405 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.105156991747 0.084324248473 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0733117375792 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195490789947 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0340374474632 0.056905535591 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.01 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.7 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 78.4519038076 85% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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