The chart shows the number of days the average employee has off work per year in 4 different countries

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The chart shows the number of days the average employee has off work per year in 4 different countries.

The table gives information about the number of days off an average worker can get annually in 4 different nations.
Overall, employees in Italy and the UK have more time off every year than those working in the USA and Japan. Even though, the 4 countries have nearly the same number of public holiday, workers in Italy and the UK are offered with a greater number of annual leave.
On average, each nation has 10 days of public holidays per year. However, people in Japan enjoy 3 days longer while the UK has 2 days less than the average figure.
Employees in Italy and the UK are allowed to be away from work but still get paid for 31 days and 27 days each year respectively. These figures are even higher than the total days off people working in the USA and Japan can have yearly, 22 days and 24 days in particular.

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2019-07-23 Nguyễn Hương Giang 34 view
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, still, while, in particular

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 7.30460921844 0% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 670.0 1615.20841683 41% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 153.0 315.596192385 48% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.37908496732 5.12529762239 85% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51700396316 4.20363070211 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.19673970747 2.80592935109 78% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 176.041082164 51% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.581699346405 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 215.1 506.74238477 42% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.5562504484 49.4020404114 56% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 95.7142857143 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8571428571 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.42857142857 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.349608205646 0.244688304435 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.163162414032 0.084324248473 193% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.047144040196 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.210333732017 0.151304729494 139% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315782341626 0.056905535591 55% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.12 12.4159519038 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 78.4519038076 42% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Minimum 250 words wanted.

Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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