As a country develops, people tend to buy more cars. Do the advantages for the individual outweigh the disadvantages for the environment?
Technology is flourishing by leaps and bounds; besides that, many opt to buy their own vehicle which is proportionally affecting our environment. It is believed that countries progress is dependent on their citizens; but, with rapid development the surroundings are being polluted equally. In my opinion, individual luxury of using cars and pollution causing vehicles are disadvantageous to environment.
On a major note, with the growth of population in this mechanical world; many tend to buy a car to led a luxurious life. In addition, there is huge damage to natural environment with increased pollution; moreover, both human life and ecosystem is being into perilous situation.
On the other hand, it is advantageous to an individual to own an independent vehicle. Because, this gives them more convenience to travel from home to work and in addition they reach on time which increases their productivity. Moreover, in a survey it is proved that an employee reaching office on time is tension free and their whole day goes smooth. The others who travel by other means of transport are late to office and feel hectic in start of their work.
Secondly, if a person who manages both study and does apart time job can be benefited by having a car. It is easy to travel from work to study place and manageable for this kind of part-time workforce. To exemplify, students who study in abroad need to do their part-time job and study so, on primary basis they tend to buy a car for sure.
In conclusion, although there is a heavy downfall in environmental conditions which results in global warming; consequently, there are equal benefits with usage of cars. I believe that with the advancement in this fast forward world we need to rush with all but need to be more cautious because we need to survive on this earth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, consequently, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1513.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 309.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 4.89644012945 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1926597562 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.89195472697 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.576051779935 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 477.0 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 11.0 4.76152304609 231% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 24.2478696729 49.4020404114 49% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 108.071428571 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0714285714 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.143612778981 0.244688304435 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0449698311589 0.084324248473 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0399850355584 0.0667982634062 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0658481395489 0.151304729494 44% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0268826285208 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.82 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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