7. Some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree ? Include any relevant examples based on your knowledge and experience.
Nawdays it is belleved that, some people think that the best many to motivate and ecourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell, in this essay i would discuss first the advantage of this problem and second the desedvantage of this view before coming to roasonabble conclusia.
In the one hand the main benefit of this problem is we benefit more without having to force some one to work itu is because someone Will work as needed, for example in Indonesia motorcycle taxi driver online, as resulf online motorcycle taxi drivers have a profit sharing work contract for 80% drivers and 20% in comperies driver are charget a 20% discount on order rates and driver Will get what company intensive if thay meet the daily target, it is no doubl that they online motorcycle taxi drivers have no ties work.
On the other hand can divide time, itu is because can determine what time to star work, for example in Indonesia many industrial workers who are also motorcycle taxi drivers online as resulf the lock of bonding of working hours makes people look for additional in come by becoming an online motorcycle taxi driver, it is no doubl that they online motorcycle taxi survices are very useful for helping some one's activities.
In conclusia from this case if is already clear that i gives more menit rather that dimenit, i belived that Indonesia people prefer to use online motorcycle taxi services rether that howing to go alone.
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- The chat below show the figures for imprisonment in live countries between 1930 and 1980 write are port for a university lecture describing the information show below 56
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement? 61
- 7. Some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree ? Include any relevant examples based on your knowledge and experience. 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, look, second, so, for example, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 41.998997996 64% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1203.0 1615.20841683 74% => OK
No of words: 254.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73622047244 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.99216450694 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34774115349 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555118110236 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 402.3 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 63.0 20.2975951904 310% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 119.680825532 49.4020404114 242% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 300.75 106.682146367 282% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 63.5 20.7667163134 306% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.25 7.06120827912 230% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168014163509 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.123406157123 0.084324248473 146% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.104104112819 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123406157123 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.104104112819 0.056905535591 183% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.6 13.0946893788 249% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 7.53 50.2224549098 15% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.9 11.3001002004 247% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.1 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.0 9.78957915832 286% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 27.2 10.1190380762 269% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 10.7795591182 260% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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