Nobody anyone wants to be left behind in their own career life, because money is the king. I view that some people would like to do work in the same organisation and other people to do prefer different organisations. There are manifold reasons behind it. I want to describe that what is the reason behind change to organisation and offer some solution as per my opinion.
First and foremost, after completed studies, every person need to do some practice & experience for their own good career.Then, they have pass to some time for getting a good knowledge regarding a field of career. View to positive point, we can taking a good stability in proper one field so we can achieve promotion step by step after given some experience. People can standing a good reputation by doing a job in same organisation for long time.
At least but not last, many person have not suitable work in their own job location or company. Due to this effect, they can not create good image or personality and not proper stability in any other field. Furthermore, they can not achieve upper post of position in any one field. But, few person get more salary from change to own job place. Even, anybody can not decided to proper human being environment for work place. Which is comfortable or not about work regarding criteria.
To sum up, According to me, I mark that as per public review and survey of media on myriad number of job person. Whom is very happy to do work in same field than changing to various company or field of place. That is the main reason of very few drawback, all people to do work in same organisation.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 123, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Then
... & experience for their own good career.Then, they have pass to some time for gettin...
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Line 3, column 246, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'take'
Suggestion: take
... career. View to positive point, we can taking a good stability in proper one field so...
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Line 5, column 24, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun person seems to be countable; consider using: 'many people', 'many persons'.
Suggestion: many people; many persons
...or long time. At least but not last, many person have not suitable work in their own job...
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Line 5, column 367, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'decide'
Suggestion: decide
...to own job place. Even, anybody can not decided to proper human being environment for w...
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Line 7, column 242, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun drawback seems to be countable; consider using: 'few drawbacks'.
Suggestion: few drawbacks
... place. That is the main reason of very few drawback, all people to do work in same organisa...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, regarding, so, then, at least, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1329.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63066202091 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5172988498 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.550522648084 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 428.4 506.74238477 85% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.1877990419 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.0625 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.9375 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.3125 7.06120827912 61% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.302601430816 0.244688304435 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0984686735922 0.084324248473 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0867207589667 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.180401929801 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0492786410402 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.3 13.0946893788 71% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.28 12.4159519038 75% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.23 8.58950901804 84% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 78.4519038076 64% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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