tpo 18
Both the reading and the lecture try to discuss about extinction of a type of even green tree which were very common in the state of Florida called Torreya. Although the lecture presents some sulotion for survivation of the species, the professor dismiss sulotiones by clarify some reasons.
At first the reading passage declares that, the first option to survive these tree is to reestablish Torreya in the same location which it had been for thousands of years in cool and wet climate. On the other hand, the lecture asserts that in is not likely to happend because temprature increase in everywhere so that there is not cool and wet place for these type of tree.
Secondly, the reading claimes that, another option is to move Torreya to an completely different location. The professor, however repiudiate this sulotion with an example. The example was about a tree which were translated to another climate but, other species decrease.
Finally, the reading passage argues that, third option is to protect Torreya in research center. By doing this, reaearcher can not only prevent the species, but also conduct research on them. But the lecture mentions, the population cannot resist on research center in long term.
- tpo 29 73
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?To improve the quality of education, universities should spend more money on salaries for university professors.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 63
- Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?Young people today have no influence on the important decisions that determine the future of society as a whole.Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. 70
- A university education is essential to success in life 83
- do you agree or disagree businesses should hire employees for their entire lives 60
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 74, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...t, another option is to move Torreya to an completely different location. The prof...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, however, if, second, secondly, so, third, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 10.4613686534 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 7.30242825607 82% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 22.412803532 49% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 30.3222958057 99% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 5.01324503311 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 1373.03311258 74% => OK
No of words: 202.0 270.72406181 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05940594059 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76996954942 4.04702891845 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48353069505 2.5805825403 96% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 145.348785872 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589108910891 0.540411800872 109% => OK
syllable_count: 314.1 419.366225166 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 3.25607064018 0% => OK
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 21.2450331126 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6108359924 49.2860985944 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.2 110.228320801 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.2 21.698381199 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06452816374 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 4.33554083885 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.27373068433 164% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.256460636653 0.272083759551 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0980945907569 0.0996497079465 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0744837854541 0.0662205650399 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.150919539799 0.162205337803 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00663523827471 0.0443174109184 15% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.3589403974 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 53.8541721854 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.0289183223 101% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.2367328918 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 63.6247240618 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.7273730684 126% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.498013245 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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