TPO-15 Cane toads
The passage and lecture are both related to the increase of a number of cane toads in Australia. The author of the passage has proposed some approaches to deal with the spread of the cane toad. In contrast, The lecturer opposes that these methods are unsuccessful for this problem.
Firstly, According to the passage, the primary way that the author mentioned is to build a national fence in order to prevent them from moving the other parts of Australia that have been colonized. But the lecturer disagrees with this point by stating that their eggs and young toads could be flown by the stream of the river and finally, penetrate the fence to grow on the other side of the river.
Secondly, the author puts forward another solution to capture young toads and their eggs by using simple traps or hands of the volunteers. because of its easy accumulation and elimination. While the lecturer challenges with this term by putting his point that there are many untrained volunteers, as a result, it will increase the rate of catching the wrong species like king toad.
Finally, By developing a disease-causing virus would be considered as another effective way to regulate the populations of cane toads and Its effect won't harm other infected species, and it affects only cane toads. On the other hand, the professor thinks differently that this method would pose a threat to other species population like king toad which is one of the essential parts of ecology and it is the native species and then it will bring about the ecological disaster if there is the lack of its number.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 140, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Because
...imple traps or hands of the volunteers. because of its easy accumulation and eliminatio...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, then, while, in contrast, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 10.4613686534 96% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 5.04856512141 99% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 7.30242825607 151% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 12.0772626932 58% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 22.412803532 98% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 30.3222958057 132% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1317.0 1373.03311258 96% => OK
No of words: 272.0 270.72406181 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84191176471 5.08290768461 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.04702891845 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55315199302 2.5805825403 99% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 145.348785872 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.547794117647 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 408.6 419.366225166 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.55342163355 97% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 6.0 8.23620309051 73% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.25165562914 240% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.51434878587 132% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 13.0662251656 77% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 21.2450331126 127% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 71.8390562299 49.2860985944 146% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.7 110.228320801 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.2 21.698381199 125% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2 7.06452816374 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 4.19205298013 24% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 4.45695364238 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.426562328484 0.272083759551 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15383404908 0.0996497079465 154% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0891100694193 0.0662205650399 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.236735038132 0.162205337803 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0498059072839 0.0443174109184 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 53.8541721854 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.0289183223 114% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.2367328918 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 8.42419426049 102% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 63.6247240618 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 10.7273730684 98% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.498013245 122% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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