The table show sales of fairtrade – labelled coffe and bananas (1999 & 2004]
The table show sales of fairtrade – labelled coffe and bananas (1999 & 2004] Overall, the amount sales Coffee was highest in years 1999 from Denmark with total 1,8 Millions of euros and the lowest which is from Sweden with Quantity 0,8 millions of euros and in the years 2004 there have been changes which is where Uk be the highest from 1,5 millions of euros in years 1999 become 20 millions of euro when Denmark don’t get any higher but experiencing ascension into 2 and Sweden still be low but have a rise with total 1 millions of euros .
On sales Bananas overall was highest in 1999 by SWIZERLAND with quantity 15 millions of euros and the lowest which is from Belgium on total 0,6 millions of euros and in years 2004 there’s been a lot of changes who where Swizerland experienced a very high rise with total 47 millions of euros, Belgium not again make minimum in total 4 millions of euros and last that’s become the lowest of the Denmark with Quantity 0,9 Millions Euros
Finally that all state always experience the change in the year 1999 & 2004
- some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. do you agree or disagre? include any relevant examples based on your knowladge and experience 56
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective , and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement 61
- The table show sales of fairtrade – labelled coffe and bananas (1999 & 2004] 56
- Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective , and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement 11
- Information in five countriest impririsonment 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, still
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 7.85571142285 0% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 2.0 24.0651302605 8% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 884.0 1615.20841683 55% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 190.0 315.596192385 60% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65263157895 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.71268753763 4.20363070211 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.34571436938 2.80592935109 84% => OK
Unique words: 93.0 176.041082164 53% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.489473684211 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 251.1 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.60771543086 81% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 2.0 16.0721442886 12% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 95.0 20.2975951904 468% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 12.5 49.4020404114 25% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 442.0 106.682146367 414% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 95.0 20.7667163134 457% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.192176287723 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.166845844382 0.084324248473 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685801659 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14144146828 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0694493177713 0.056905535591 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 48.0 13.0946893788 367% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 0.43 50.2224549098 1% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 0.0 7.44779559118 0% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 36.8 11.3001002004 326% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.87 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.17 8.58950901804 130% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 78.4519038076 43% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 52.0 9.78957915832 531% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 40.0 10.1190380762 395% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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