some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. do you agree or disagre? include any relevant examples based on your knowladge and experience
Nowadays it is belived some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. In this essay, I completely agree that it gives more advantage rather than di savantage for some reasons. In the one hand benefit of this problem is to get to income that make a person’s life batter than before this is because some people always need much money for live and feel more appreciated after work, For example some people that work as marketing whom is where always have goal that should unfulfilled.and when reached will get bonus from boss, As result make that person more passion to work and can excee target desirable. Hopefully the all company always provide bonus for employed in order to could work over targets desirable.
In the another point of view many people work not always because bonus but just for hobby,social,have un, and very important can help some people.Firstly Because happynes not only about money for example someone that work In social community which work because feel respect secondly because want have new experience from live than before, for example someone that work in Radio station ehich work because want filling up the slack to avoid wasting time, thirdly because only impanwhile not for long time for example when someone work with parents or family, not hope get price or bonus but just for help and solidarity as member in a family or as a child
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: , social
... always because bonus but just for hobby,social,have un, and very important can help so...
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...and very important can help some people.Firstly Because happynes not only about money ...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y important can help some people.Firstly Because happynes not only about money fo...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...r bonus but just for help and solidarity as member in a family or as a child
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
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...ity as member in a family or as a child
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, while, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 41.998997996 62% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1205.0 1615.20841683 75% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.78174603175 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41127189971 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 141.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.559523809524 0.561755894193 100% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 50.0 20.2975951904 246% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 219.782619877 49.4020404114 445% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 241.0 106.682146367 226% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 50.4 20.7667163134 243% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.2 7.06120827912 229% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 2.0 4.38176352705 46% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236424216723 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.180149843813 0.084324248473 214% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.216083005108 0.0667982634062 323% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.192259763207 0.151304729494 127% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0985409072184 0.056905535591 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 26.3 13.0946893788 201% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 20.73 50.2224549098 41% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.8 11.3001002004 202% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 11.33 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.19 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.0 10.1190380762 217% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 23.0 10.7795591182 213% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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