Some people think that the best way to motivate and encourage people to work hard is to pay them how much they produce and sell. Do you agree or disagree ? Include any relevant examples based on your knowledge and experience

Grammar and spelling errors:
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in this era, relation between own company ...
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...n company and employee is important. And many people think, to pay employee with ...
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... many people think, to pay employee with how much their produce and sell. than, t...
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... with how much their produce and sell. than, the best way to motivate and encourage...
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... with how much their produce and sell. than, the best way to motivate and encourage...
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...And I agree for the statement, that its more better to employer and had increase income a c...
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...p or developing a venture. Taking the U.S campany as an example, google officer h...
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...y, finland government has a great human resources, and automatically their job prospect a...
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...prospect a fail and impact toward profit capital family. as a result their countr...
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...d impact toward profit capital family. as a result their countries popular the na...
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..., this does not mean that anything will finishing a problem with a lot of salary or perk...
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...essure regulation and hight target goals . So that, workman cannot enjoy with thei...
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...eir life event though had lot of money. it is thus clear that work is not all abou...
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...gression of people could be grow pay. I belive more better both corporation and employe sho...
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...n of people could be grow pay. I belive more better both corporation and employe should had...
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...tween regulation and produce of worker. that People can relish and get life balance....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, as a result, to sum up

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 21.0 10.4138276553 202% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1248.0 1615.20841683 77% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95238095238 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58615848696 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.634920634921 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 393.3 506.74238477 78% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1958638421 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.1428571429 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.85714285714 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 18.0 5.01903807615 359% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.189180593476 0.244688304435 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072145781224 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.111192308283 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.120339095036 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.114402220492 0.056905535591 201% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.13 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.48 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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More content wanted.

Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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