t can be seen that, OECD and Developing countries accounts for the major rate of gas emissons while transition economies
The pie chart combined with the bar graph illustrates the proportion of greenhouse gas emissions worldwide in 3 different fields namely OECD, transition economies and developing countries and the worldwide carbon dioxide emissions by many sectors in 2002 and forecast for 2030.
It can be seen that OECD and Developing countries account for the major rate of gas emissions while transition economies are responsible for the minority of gas emissions. Industry becomes the major cause of carbon dioxide, simultaneously, waste contributions, transportation and consumer is predicted to experience an upward trend in the future.
The 2 given pie charts show that there will be a slight increase in the percentage of emissions in the developing countries from 38% in 2002 to 48% in 2020. Whereas, in OECD, the rate of gas emission is expected to decrease to 43%, is 9% less than in 2002. countries with transition economies is estimated to remain at 9% in 2020, is 1% less than in 2002.
The bar chart reveals that industry is the main factor which contributes to carbon dioxide emissions, the figure is expected to rise to nearly 11 billion tons in 2020. next comes the consumer sector, which is projected to produce more than 8 billion tons in 2020, is twice as much as the figure in 2002. the third largest producer will be transportations with the amount is expected up to over 5 millions ton in 2020, triple than the quantitive in 20002
- Some people believe that there should be a fixed punishment for each type of crime Others however argue that the circumstances of an individual crime and the motivation for committing it should always be taken into account when deciding on the punishment 77
- Some school leavers tend to go travelling or work for a period of time before going to university directly what do you think are the advantages and disadvantages 78
- t can be seen that, OECD and Developing countries accounts for the major rate of gas emissons while transition economies 73
- Topic tourism has become one of the fastest growing industries in the world Million people today are travelling farther and farther throughout the year Some people argue that the development of tourism has had negative effects on local communities other t 78
- The given chart illustrates the level of serious violent crime namely rape, robbery, aggravated assault and homicide between 1978 and 2000. 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, third, whereas, while, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 1.00243902439 299% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 4.0 5.60731707317 71% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 33.7804878049 118% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 3.97073170732 151% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1210.0 965.302439024 125% => OK
No of words: 243.0 196.424390244 124% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97942386831 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94822203886 3.73543355544 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91217329029 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 128.0 106.607317073 120% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.526748971193 0.547539520022 96% => OK
syllable_count: 350.1 283.868780488 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 49.8444493981 43.030603864 116% => OK
Chars per sentence: 134.444444444 112.824112599 119% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.0 22.9334400587 118% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.33333333333 5.23603664747 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326079935213 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.146434154395 0.103423049105 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.209890548127 0.0843802449381 249% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.222419724171 0.15604864568 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.178488753461 0.0819641961636 218% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.2329268293 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.99 61.2550243902 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.3012195122 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.9 11.4140731707 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.35 8.06136585366 104% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 11.4329268293 131% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.