Dear Tom,
I am writing you this letter to express my sincere apology for not be able to attend our yearly road-map meeting last December 27th.
The reason for not attending this meeting was that my youngest daughter baby Anna was severely excreting feces six times a day for two days a row already. My wife had her one of the feces checked by a hospital laboratory and sadly it was confirmed that she got an amoeba parasite inside her system. Since we do not have any other companion except the three of us, I had decided to stick with them first and cater all the preliminary patient needs.
I fully understand the importance of this meeting since this will significantly bring a huge impact on the company's path for the coming new year. To mitigate my absence, I had asked my senior assistant programmer Jenalyn to list all of the things that was discussed in the meeting.
I hope that you will forgive my absence and be assured that I will always give my fullest for the company's growth.
Yours sincerely,
Joebet
- Companies use a variety of methods to improve the sales and their products. What are those methods? Which is the most effective method? 84
- An increasing number of professionals, such as doctors and teachers, are leaving their own poorer countries to work in developed countries.What problems does this cause? What solutions can you suggest to deal with this situation? 77
- With the development of social media more and more youngsters are being allowed unsupervised access to the Internet What potential problems may this trend lead to What solutions can you suggest to deal with it 92
- Some people believe school children should be given multiple short vacations while others believe they should get one long vacation. Give advantage for both and your point of view. 61
- Some people think that it is a good thing for senior management positions to have very high salaries compared to other workers of the same company or organization. To what extend do you agree? 89
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 230, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...or assistant programmer Jenalyn to list all of the things that was discussed in the meetin...
^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 17.0 26.3917525773 64% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 843.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 182.0 206.0 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63186813187 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.67297393991 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43091354419 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 120.0 127.690721649 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659340659341 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 267.3 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 16.3608247423 134% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 38.7086472897 44.8134815571 86% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.375 76.5299724578 138% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.75 16.8248392259 135% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 4.34317383033 37% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 7.41237113402 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144204483833 0.216113520407 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629851891509 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0462913159051 0.0603063233224 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0975121635418 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0349972129211 0.0580467560999 60% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 8.37731958763 141% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 70.7449484536 81% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 8.71597938144 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 7.59969072165 113% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 8.54432989691 126% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.