You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to study/work.
Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter:
describe the situation
explain your problems and why it is difficult to study/work
say what kind of accommodation you would prefer
Dear Sir,
I am a student at Trinity College and currently I am living in a shared your at your student accommodation hall named Derwent Valley. I am a final year student and hence I have to focus a hundred percent on my studies. However, the person with whom I am sharing my room is a first year student and has no respect for my time or studies.
First of all, I would like to state that I live in room no. 22 on the 2nd floor. The person sharing the room with me often forgets his keys and asks me to open the door every single time. Furthermore, he often brings a few friends along with him even after visiting hours and they listen to loud music. I have informed the hall tutor regarding this issue but he has yet to take any action. On top of that, my room mate keeps snoring every day which disturbs my sleep. I have even tried putting ear-muffs on but it does not help much. Lastly, but not least, the above mentioned person keeps his garbage in for a few days. Often, there is a foul smell and I have recently noticed some bugs. I am quite scared that this may lead to severe diseases if not taken care of.
Therefore, with the above mentioned reasons and since my semester final is coming closer, I would like to request you for any other room at your accommodation that is available currently. I am willing to pay any extra charges but since this is urgent, I hope you will be kind enough to resolve the matter immediately. Please inform me about the procedure and if there is anything else I can do to speed up the process.
With Regards.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, regarding, so, therefore, first of all, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 5.05154639175 277% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 37.0 26.3917525773 140% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1267.0 937.175257732 135% => OK
No of words: 296.0 206.0 144% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.28040540541 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14784890444 3.78020617076 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29558511314 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.574324324324 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 402.3 290.88556701 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 12.6804123711 126% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 16.3608247423 110% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.356748214 44.8134815571 92% => OK
Chars per sentence: 79.1875 76.5299724578 103% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 16.8248392259 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 4.34317383033 161% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.198250895747 0.216113520407 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548570147714 0.0766984524023 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0530941284746 0.0603063233224 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.127766598536 0.12726935374 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0294419099085 0.0580467560999 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 8.37731958763 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 70.7449484536 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 7.45979381443 106% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.54 8.71597938144 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.2 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 8.54432989691 108% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.4606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.