This statement argue that compared with the methods of speaker of reformer can use,scandals are more effective in drawing our attention on problems.I disagree this statement in part.There are different kinds of scandals, problems also are various in different area. Our attentions may be attracted by the scandals,while it merely could be an anecdote of a pop star,which makes some fun for us, when we can talk about at party.I believe speakers and reformer are not only good at drawing public foucus,but also master other area, making plans, for example. Ways may vary for them to solve problems.
People often get shocked by lots of scandals, which the Newspaper,Televison,Internet always offer. Some of the scandals may draw public attentions,on the other hand, the media isn't just composed by scandals,there are other kinds of news or affrairs, including speechses given by spkeakers. Martin Luthur King, he didn't draw attentions of public by scandals.His famous speech "I Have a Dream" has inspired people, not only the african-americans, to fight against racism generation by generation.The power of scandal cannot compete with this inspiration given by the great movement leader at all.Reformer would not take the scandal as the first choice to implement his or her ideas in my opinion.
Meanwhile,another kind of scandals from publie figures like pop stars is not important enough to draw people attention, which I believe their emergence is a method that public figures make a notification to people they are alive.Some people, like me, don't take care of this kind of anecdote at all.Compared with the problems human must confront, staving, illness, water shortage, air pollution, thess scandals are so trivial.
Indeed, there are some kind of scaldals we need to take attention.Finncance fraud,for example ,is one of the worst scandals in business.The scandal could cheat the investors, the public, which may cause big troubles.In 2008, there were lots of scandals in Wall Street,then those scandals, drawing attetions from all over the world,became the trigger of global finnacial crisis.With continuous attention, while it's not enough, and great endeavor by people, we weahered this tought period.
Finally, it depends on the specific affair which scandals could compete with speakers' or reformer's method. People's attetion is not always attracted by them.
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- Laws should be flexible enough to take account of various circumstances, times, and places. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the statement and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In develop 83
- The best way to teach is to praise positive actions and ignore negative ones. Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and s 66
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, if, may, so, then, while, for example, kind of, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 19.5258426966 77% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 31.0 33.0505617978 94% => OK
Preposition: 57.0 58.6224719101 97% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 12.9106741573 124% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2019.0 2235.4752809 90% => OK
No of words: 371.0 442.535393258 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.44204851752 5.05705443957 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.38877662729 4.55969084622 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.23515042903 2.79657885939 116% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 215.323595506 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.601078167116 0.4932671777 122% => OK
syllable_count: 604.8 704.065955056 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.38483146067 114% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 20.2370786517 49% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 23.0359550562 161% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 156.559381705 60.3974514979 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 201.9 118.986275619 170% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.1 23.4991977007 158% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7 5.21951772744 205% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 34.0 7.80617977528 436% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 10.2758426966 10% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 5.13820224719 156% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.182883510411 0.243740707755 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0782703019436 0.0831039109588 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0594314621709 0.0758088955206 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113403716956 0.150359130593 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0453387964427 0.0667264976115 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 22.7 14.1392134831 161% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 48.8420337079 69% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 12.1743820225 145% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.86 12.1639044944 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.9 8.38706741573 118% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 100.480337079 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 17.5 11.8971910112 147% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.8 11.2143820225 150% => OK
text_standard: 18.0 11.7820224719 153% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.