Currently there is a trend towards the use of alternative forms of medicine. However, at best these methods are ineffective, and at worst they may be dangerous. To what extent do you agree with this statement?
Nowadays, it is believed that alternative medicine forms become more popular to using as the treatment in the community. However, there are still many people who think that these drugs are not effective and could be dangerous to consume. In this essay, I completely disagree if these unconventional medicines are not effectual for several reasons.
On the one side, some people doubt the ability of nonconventional drugs to cure disease because they found many unconventional clinics that offer folk medicines without someone who is truly expert in these treatments. For an example, some people take advantage of poverty to open herbal clinics for people in developing countries without experts or licensing. As consequence, some treatments become ineffective, even some people get the wrong prescription for medication which is fatal to their health. It this no doubt that traditional medicines which do not given by the expert can be dangerous to their consumer.
In the other side, there is no denying the fact that natural remedies have many benefits to helping people. Firstly, this method of treatment has been carried out since centuries ago. Such as, traditional Chinese medicine practiced by Chinese society since 2500 years ago includes various forms of herbal medicine, acupuncture, massage and the others. Secondly, Traditional medicines have been helping people in poor and remote areas. They use nature to get medicines because of limited costs or access to hospitals. Not only this, generally these drugs are cheaper than conventional treatments, so they are more affordable for people in the lower and middle class.
To conclude, although some people think that nonconventional medicines can be dangerous, it must be acknowledged that alternative medicine given by experts can bring many benefits and help many people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, second, secondly, so, still, even so, no doubt, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1559.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.43205574913 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87354854818 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.557491289199 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 502.2 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.306964378 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.357142857 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.5 20.7667163134 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 7.06120827912 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127498485427 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0495541936423 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0317029330876 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0881778112006 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0309588237025 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.86 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.