The chart below gives the information about three different crimes in England and Wales from 1970 to 2005.
The line graph illustrates the information regarding the number of categories of crimes which namely as car theft, house burglar and street robbery in the span of 1970 to 2005 in england and Wales.
It totally vivid, the year of 1970 witnessed a net about 18000 cars were stolen and that trend was increased around 25 thousand cars theft in 1990. Afterwards, the growth of cars theft increased rapidly, peaking at 34 thousand. After that cars theft sharply dropped at
27 thousand in end of the year 2005.
Furthermore, the trend of house burglar and street robbery experienced some slightly fluctuations from year of 1970 to 1985. After that house burglar increased steadily and peaked at 13 thousand in 1995 and it fell rapidly about 6 thousand where as street robbery climb slightly by 9 thousand and it increased gradually across house burglar at 14 thousand.
Overall, the vogue of cars theft increased by 1995 and decrease sharply in end of the year where as house burglar and street robbery had some fluctuations throughout the year between 1970 to 1985 but burglar dropped in 2005 where as street robbery was increased gradually in same year.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...reased rapidly, peaking at 34 thousand. After that cars theft sharply dropped at 27...
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...After that cars theft sharply dropped at 27 thousand in end of the year 2005. ...
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...95 and it fell rapidly about 6 thousand where as street robbery climb slightly by 9 thou...
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...and decrease sharply in end of the year where as house burglar and street robbery had so...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, regarding, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 6.8 147% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 33.7804878049 110% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.95384615385 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54828970245 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 92.0 106.607317073 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.471794871795 0.547539520022 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 260.1 283.868780488 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 22.4926829268 120% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.231204744 43.030603864 168% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.0 112.824112599 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8571428571 22.9334400587 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.42857142857 5.23603664747 85% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 3.83414634146 130% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.103008236366 0.215688989381 48% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0617948970325 0.103423049105 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545668549539 0.0843802449381 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0760440399052 0.15604864568 49% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053551796064 0.0819641961636 65% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.8 13.2329268293 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 69.45 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.57 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 11.4329268293 96% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.9970731707 116% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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