You share a parking area with several neighbours and have recently started having problems.
-explain Ghr problems
-suggesting ways to help situation
-proposing a possible meeting.
Dear neighbours,
I am writing this letter to complain you about the problems which have been recently noticed by me pertained to parking.
Firstly, I have observed for few weeks that vehicles have been parked everywhere which has created an obstacle to park my car. In addition that, when I was about to park my car yesterday, a dent has been occured in my car because of undisciplined parking and on top of that, I have also seen quarrels abkjg the availability of parking space between two neighbours.
Secondly, I have also thought to get rid from this difficult situation. Furthermore, fine should be made mandatory for inappropriate oaekknd in our society. So everyone would park vehicles in a proper manner. Additionally, personal parking space should be allotted to avoid conflicts regarding the same.
Thirdly, although, I have shared my ideas, it would be appreciated if all can meet on upcoming Sunday go solve this difficulty. So it would be great if you all could come to discuss this matter.
Finally, I request you all to reply me at your earliest convenience.
Yours faithfully,
Vishv Adthakkar
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear neighbours, I am writing this letter to complain you...
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Line 5, column 131, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[2]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: addition,
... created an obstacle to park my car. In addition that, when I was about to park my car y...
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Line 7, column 190, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a proper manner" with adverb for "proper"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...ociety. So everyone would park vehicles in a proper manner. Additionally, personal parking space s...
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Line 13, column 18, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...liest convenience. Yours faithfully, Vishv Adthakkar
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, in addition, on top of that
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 5.05154639175 20% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 186.0 206.0 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08064516129 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69299088775 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90748890508 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 283.5 290.88556701 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7621022316 44.8134815571 120% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9090909091 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9090909091 16.8248392259 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.2727272727 4.34317383033 260% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176774444199 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0610674928595 0.0766984524023 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0488970265019 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0928479738536 0.12726935374 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445375132334 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 70.7449484536 90% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 7.45979381443 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.89 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.76 7.59969072165 115% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 41.2886597938 124% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 8.62886597938 156% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.