graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.You should write at least 150 words.

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graph shows Underground Station passenger numbers in London.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
You should write at least 150 words.

As we can see, the above line graph illustrates the average usage of subway trains by Peoples in London on a 1-hour basis. It can be measured in numbers.
In general, usage of subway transport is high at morning hours between 6 am to 18 pm. However, it dramatically decreased in the peak hours.
Beginning with, from 6 am to 10 am it surges 100 and gradually increased to 400. Similarly, their is dramatic decline from 400 to 180. Later there was fluctuations for every 2 hours about 100 passengers.
Secondly, usage of underground station roses from 100 to 390 at peak hours. However, there decline of 180 from 19 to 20 pm after 2 hours there is fluctuations about 100.

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 92, Rule ID: THEIR_IS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'there'?
Suggestion: there
... gradually increased to 400. Similarly, their is dramatic decline from 400 to 180. La...
^^^^^
Line 4, column 137, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[3]
Message: Did you mean 'there are fluctuations'?
Suggestion: there are fluctuations
...e of 180 from 19 to 20 pm after 2 hours there is fluctuations about 100.
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, second, secondly, similarly, in general

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 1.0 6.8 15% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 555.0 965.302439024 57% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 121.0 196.424390244 62% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.5867768595 4.92477711251 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.31662479036 3.73543355544 89% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7366480479 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 80.0 106.607317073 75% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.661157024793 0.547539520022 121% => OK
syllable_count: 159.3 283.868780488 56% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 22.4926829268 58% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.1032436053 43.030603864 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 61.6666666667 112.824112599 55% => More chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 13.4444444444 22.9334400587 59% => More words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.33333333333 5.23603664747 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 4.09268292683 195% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0524016517532 0.215688989381 24% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0212110287509 0.103423049105 21% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347021058275 0.0843802449381 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0340588546201 0.15604864568 22% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0237712094047 0.0819641961636 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.9 13.2329268293 52% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 83.66 61.2550243902 137% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.8 10.3012195122 47% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 8.75 11.4140731707 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.8 8.06136585366 97% => OK
difficult_words: 27.0 40.7170731707 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 11.4329268293 48% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.9970731707 65% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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