These days, many films and pieces of music are available online free. Is it a positive or negative development?
In this 21st century, technology has tremendously advanced in the music and film industry.Playing music and films online for free is just a fraction of seconds away. So certainly it is a positive development with the following reasons, which I will discuss in next paragraphs.
If we see from past, music plays a vital role in people’s life to get relax from hustle and bustle of utterly stressful life. If we compare it with 20th century, in past people used to listen music in television, radio and tap recorder, which was not that much easy as we are listening music now. The main reason was, for listening music, people has to buy cd’s and audio taps. Another reason is people would not be able to listened their favourite music often in television and radio. They had to wait a long. Hence we can easily find that today it has become very much easy to listen music anytime, anywhere and free of cost. For example today there are many online music applications available such as gaana.com amazon prime music and many more, in which we can very easily listen our favourite music online.
What is more, with this development, people can use their free time with music easily. For instance, people can listen music while traveling, waiting in a queue for their turn to come and while exercising such as in gym and jogging. Therefore music has become part and parcel of people’s life due to the development of technology. Another plus point of online music Is that people do not have to store music in phone or in computer rather they can use that storage space for other purpose.
At the end, I would say that online music really a blessing for the people as it is available free of cost and in no time. It has changed the way people looking for the music, specially for music lovers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Playing
...advanced in the music and film industry.Playing music and films online for free is just...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
...ion and radio. They had to wait a long. Hence we can easily find that today it has be...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Therefore,
... exercising such as in gym and jogging. Therefore music has become part and parcel of peo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, look, really, second, so, therefore, while, as to, for example, for instance, such as, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1491.0 1615.20841683 92% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 4.67398119122 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50505331401 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.51724137931 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 480.6 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.376340707 49.4020404114 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.4 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2666666667 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.236359371022 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0907017039889 0.084324248473 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0647759764736 0.0667982634062 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172960777657 0.151304729494 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0466969197684 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.81 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 78.4519038076 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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