It is generally accepted that smoking causes the deaths of large number of people. In order to address this problem governments should bans smoking in public places. To what extend do you agree or disagree?
A smoking is the curse of the society as a result it is responsible for spreading numerous disease in human body which can kill them. A government should strictly ban the use of cigarette in crowd place. In this essay will explain why government authorities have need to take this action and explain hazardous impact of cigarette in people s life.
There are many reasons for banning smoking in public places. First of all, A smoke of cigarette is very harmful for non-smoker who stand near to smoker cause of this, they can face same disease who is faced by smoker, such as lung disease, cancer, heart disease, stroke and diabetes. The death rate is high cause of this illness specially in America where 16 million people death. So nation have make some duty for saving of citizen . Secondly, woman feel more struggle than man especially for pregnant lady who cannot take breath in emissions smoke as well as cigarette smoke danger for their children. if country would ban it, than people can take breath in fresh air.
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The government can ban all public place for instance bus stand, railway station, school, university and so on, where people can use cigarette. government should take heavy amount of money and prison punishment for that person who break the law. For example, last year Indian government have banned the use of smoking in crowd place and every person can complain against that person who use cigarette.
In the conclusion, if government create this law, than it will become the blessing of today generation. In my opinion, every country should apply this law in this nation for protecting their upcoming generation.
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first, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, such as, as a result, as well as, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1362.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89928057554 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43519055953 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579136690647 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 5.0 2.52805611222 198% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.4463702147 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2857142857 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.07142857143 7.06120827912 128% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 5.01903807615 219% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197051509486 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808085041428 0.084324248473 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525892536084 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.123126882538 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0274176648936 0.056905535591 48% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.6 13.0946893788 89% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.14 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 8.58950901804 86% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 78.4519038076 62% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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