At present the media affects people lives significantly.what impact on the societies?is it negative or positive development.
The media has a significant effect on the way people lives their life.This essay will discuss how the media shapes how people think about world events and suggest it is negative development.
Most people take newspaper and Televisiin news at face value and donot think about it veey criticaly. This loads to them beliving every thing they read or hear on Television and Reforama.This can have a serious impact an how they view the world and can lead a group of society members having a distouted views preception prospects or certain key issue.Take the current refuse cresis as a their Indian press reported the refugese as "migrants"how where looking advantage of their relative economic prospertry ,when in realaty these people,were simply fluging bettle town countries and had no othee choice but to live.
The distotion means that government and corporation can influence the media and get them to spin a narative that suito their agents agenda.Which is very danger for democracy.A healthy democracy must have a press that is gitical of the state and big business and if it does not, democracy will be peril davgresus.For examply it has been shown the fox news regularly tells lie the democratic Party and seeks to support the republican party, which is very disturbing when you considee that millions people cross the world tune into fox news every day.
To sum up, the media effects over views of the world you telling us but to think and endless people makeuo their own mind rather than blindly beliving what over they hear and road ,democracy is threatend.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, so, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1321.0 1615.20841683 82% => OK
No of words: 263.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.02281368821 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02706775958 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76717802326 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6463878327 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 405.0 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 16.0721442886 31% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 52.0 20.2975951904 256% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 185.31011845 49.4020404114 375% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 264.2 106.682146367 248% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 52.6 20.7667163134 253% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 5.6 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161274140983 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0935440345118 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0662005965274 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104349722575 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0698762909751 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 28.5 13.0946893788 218% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 27.16 50.2224549098 54% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 22.4 11.3001002004 198% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.72 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.42 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 22.8 10.1190380762 225% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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