Letter to friend for getting a job than going to college
Dear Riya,
I am very honoured you choose me to come to me with your question. I have been thinking about you for a while now and I was suggest you get a job rather than attending a college for pursuing your masters.
You are well aware of the fact that pursuing a masters degree is very expensive and time taking, furthermore many students who opt for the course are recent graduates who lack industry knowledge. On the other hand you have a good industry exposure and I strongly believe you might not be a good fit for the course.
Employers value job experience over educational degrees and in addition to this after graduating from the master degree you will end up with the same basic entry level job which is attainable for you presently with your current experience and education background and I believe by the time students graduate from college you might get promoted to a managerial position. So taking this facts into consideration I strongly suggest you to take up a entry level job as an analyst or associate in your field of expertise instead of attending college.
I hope that you find my suggestion useful and I am always there for you in case you need any further assistance from me.
Your Friend,
Venkat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 125, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'suggested'.
Suggestion: suggested
...ing about you for a while now and I was suggest you get a job rather than attending a c...
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Line 5, column 303, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... believe you might not be a good fit for the course. Employers value job expe...
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Line 7, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...a good fit for the course. Employers value job experience over educational d...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... Employers value job experience over educational degrees and in addition to t...
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Line 7, column 174, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...d up with the same basic entry level job which is attainable for you presently wi...
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Line 7, column 384, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[1]
Message: Did you mean 'these'?
Suggestion: these
...ted to a managerial position. So taking this facts into consideration I strongly sug...
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Line 7, column 448, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...ation I strongly suggest you to take up a entry level job as an analyst or associ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, so, well, while, in addition, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 5.05154639175 158% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 26.3917525773 91% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.85567010309 233% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1022.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 218.0 206.0 106% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6880733945 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.84250218741 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58687941784 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 127.690721649 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596330275229 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 290.88556701 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 16.3608247423 165% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.290480007 44.8134815571 217% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 127.75 76.5299724578 167% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.25 16.8248392259 162% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.5 4.34317383033 173% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.172757897908 0.216113520407 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851802236483 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0847707249539 0.0603063233224 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103394452115 0.12726935374 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.065955807815 0.0580467560999 114% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 8.37731958763 171% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 7.45979381443 169% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.22 8.71597938144 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 8.62886597938 145% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 8.54432989691 150% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.