You recently received a letter from your friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think she/he should get a job:
- Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college
- Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her
- Suggest the types of job that would be suitable for him/her
Dear Lara,
It has been a few months I did not talk to you. I hope you are good. I received your letter, and I totally understand your confusion between further study and try to get a job. According to my experience, you should go for a job.
I think that attending a college without finding out about our interest is useless. There is no point to take boring lectures and prepare many assignments that you do not know whether are going to help you in the future or not. College curriculum focuses theoretical exercises, no practical performances which I found waste of money as well as time because colleges charge high fees.
I would like to suggest you that if you have a job, you can find out your interest and can work what you enjoy at the early stage of your life. Moreover, you can improve your current skills and can develop many other skills which will be essential in the future. Customer service, communication, time management, for instance. The most important is you can get experience.
I know that you have good command on speaking so, I think you should try a job where you can help customer. You can apply for the post of receptionist in hotels, health clubs or any conventional store. There are other options too if you want to start something easy to boost your confidence at first. You can join food court or coffee shops as a team member.
I will wait for your reply and would like to know where you have started. Good luck my friend.
Warn wishes,
Sara
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 25, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Lara, It has been a few months I did not talk to you. I hope you are go...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, i think, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 4.92783505155 284% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 3.03092783505 264% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.85567010309 130% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 937.175257732 131% => OK
No of words: 269.0 206.0 131% => OK
Chars per words: 4.56133828996 4.54256449028 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49975054379 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 127.690721649 126% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.598513011152 0.622605031667 96% => OK
syllable_count: 374.4 290.88556701 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 9.13402061856 142% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 12.6804123711 142% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.5176966582 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 68.1666666667 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.55555555556 4.34317383033 82% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 7.41237113402 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.339523547211 0.216113520407 157% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.109704198336 0.0766984524023 143% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.076069175881 0.0603063233224 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204669926235 0.12726935374 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0802225617571 0.0580467560999 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.5 8.37731958763 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.58 8.71597938144 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.27 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.