You work for an international company. You have seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job.
Write a letter to your manager. In your letter
- describe the training course you want to do
- explain what the company could do to help you
- say how the course will be useful for your job.
Begin with Sir or Madame,
At least 150 words.
Dear Sir,
I am writing to express my interest in the Goa- Fest Designers week-long coaching seminar that was advertised online. This will be incredibly valuable to our global design team.
This certificate course would offer us an opportunity to represent our agency in a global landscape. Additionally, it includes popular trends and tactics for making effective designs.
I would be highly obliged if you grant me leave for the same and provide written approval for my participation on the letterhead of our company. Furthermore, I would require our agency to sponsor my travel and stay as this will pave a crucial way to rank in the top advertising agencies worldwide.
This course will be highly beneficial to help us fix challenges in our creative process. On completion, I will be able to apply my knowledge and expertise to improve the quality of work and in turn will give us an upper hand in our competitive industry.
Hoping for a quick and favorable response.
Yours sincerely,
Khushleen Kaur
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 10, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Sir, I am writing to express my interest in t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 859.0 937.175257732 92% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.1130952381 4.54256449028 113% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92822660572 2.54303337028 115% => OK
Unique words: 110.0 127.690721649 86% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.654761904762 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 268.2 290.88556701 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.5313372806 44.8134815571 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 85.9 76.5299724578 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.9 4.34317383033 44% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195306645824 0.216113520407 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.076242652642 0.0766984524023 99% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0429664872447 0.0603063233224 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0944247770636 0.12726935374 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0314892077912 0.0580467560999 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 8.37731958763 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 70.7449484536 78% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.06 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 7.59969072165 124% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 41.2886597938 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 8.62886597938 99% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.