We all work or will work with many different kinds of people. In your opinion, what are some important characteristics of a coworker(someone you work closely with)? Use reasons and specific examples to explain why these characteristics are important.
Undoubtedly specialists no matter in which industry, should work in a pleasant atmosphere with mutual understanding to seize a chance to the progress of company and workers as well. In my perspective, there are some fundamental personal qualities that every colleague should have in him/herself.
To begin with, it is necessary for everyone in the office to be opened and reliable to each other, as anyone may have to encounter lots of problems and in this case coworkers would help each other to fulfil the tasks that one may not know solution. This would make colleagues closer, since the one that helped would feel comfortable with inner conscience, whereas the other one would raise the sense of gratitude towards other people. Another characteristics that is essential for coworkers is flexibility. These days things change spontaneously and to survive in this world people should be adaptable to any occasion that the group of workers may face. Thus, it is vital to have a man who anybody can always count on.
In addition, responsibility is known as the character that is among the first important for management.Clarifying this, the worker that is not able to do the task or does it with delay, holds back the company from higher goals and achievements, which seems devastatingly for both employee and other colleagues. Sense of humor and ability to talk about off topic things are also in demand, supporting that it is good for people to take a break from exhausting working process. And uncommon conversations would make friends from just workers, benefitting everyone and making people to go to the working area with expectation of enjoyable vibrations.
In conclusion, to me, if a specialists possess the qualities mentioned above, it would benefit everybody making work as one of the most wanted places.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: understanding seizing
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Suggestion:
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Suggestion: a specialist; specialists
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, may, so, thus, well, whereas, in addition, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1523.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09364548495 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.02313388492 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.585284280936 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 68.0147042925 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.454545455 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.1818181818 20.7667163134 131% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.0 7.06120827912 113% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141119288237 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541752755679 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.033978635902 0.0667982634062 51% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0826248047457 0.151304729494 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0153215086033 0.056905535591 27% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.1 13.0946893788 123% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.83 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 78.4519038076 93% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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