Art is considered an essential part of all cultures throughout the world. However, these days fewer and fewer people appreciate art and turn their focus to science, technology and business. Why do you think that is? What could be done to encourage more people to take interest in the arts?
Art has been an integral part of society since the beginning of human civilization. It is argued that interest in the fields of art is on the decline in favor of other fields such as Science and Technology. While I believe there are a variety of factors influencing this trend, measures can be taken to make it popular again.
Interest in the fields of art such as painting, sculpture, music etc., has seen a decline over the years due to several factors. Firstly, We are looking at an era where life has been fast-paced, it is a little or no time available due to busy and tight schedules. Everyone is trying hard to get things done at a faster pace leading to lives with no time for appreciating works of art. Secondly, we live in a world where success is a measure for your status, there are extremely popular fields such as IT, scientific research, medicine that have a probability of getting higher success due to the abundance of opportunities. There is less motivation to get into the fields of art due to lesser opportunities and difficult path for establishing yourself. Finally, lack of, or minimal government funding also restricts popularity and spread of art as a fulfilling career. I believe, lack of an established path for a successful art career is the cause of its declining popularity.
There are several corrective measures that can be taken to improve and elevate spread of art and its related fields. The fields of art need to have a defined structure that conveys a well-established career path. Having a career path with ample opportunities will bring more people to join this stream. Education plays a vital role in making this as a career path, educating students about art and culture as a career option will bring these fields in focus. This will not only help some students in making it as a career option but it will help others to appreciate these factors of human society. Fundings from government and other organizations will certainly help in the upliftment of these fields. Furthermore, promoting fields of art as a medium or tool for relaxation in our busy schedules will help society to reduce its stress from the daily routine.
In conclusion, although art has always been part of our lives it has seen a decline over the years. However, I believe making it as a lucrative career will not only attract more eyes but it will revive dying interest in the fields of art.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, look, second, secondly, so, well, while, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 57.0 41.998997996 136% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1986.0 1615.20841683 123% => OK
No of words: 418.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75119617225 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70733922435 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.488038277512 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 635.4 506.74238477 125% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.98008383 49.4020404114 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.526315789 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 20.7667163134 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.57894736842 7.06120827912 93% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.15209704642 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.055007593369 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0269418034403 0.0667982634062 40% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.103002535721 0.151304729494 68% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00699584485849 0.056905535591 12% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.27 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 95.0 78.4519038076 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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