There are many kind of pollution, and noise is one of them. As we know any kind of pollution is not allowed in a good society.This essay will discuss both sides, whether noise should be allowed or it should not be allowed at all, and will give reasons why there should be strict laws to control noise.
Firstly, as declared by international environmental organizations, it is a type of pollution. High pitch noise will cause many types of mental disharmony and disturbances; and this mental agitation will turn a person violent and misbehaving. A research by School of Cognitive Ability showed that people who work or live in a noisy surrounding have higher chances of getting irritated and disturbed mentally. For the same reason my countries around the world have banned loud music in open and honking on roads.
Secondly, noise not only affects life of human beings but also of other animals as well. Animals get frightened from high pitched echos.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 11, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun kind seems to be countable; consider using: 'many kinds'.
Suggestion: many kinds
There are many kind of pollution, and noise is one of them....
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Line 1, column 16, Rule ID: THERE_RE_MANY[3]
Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'kinds'?
Suggestion: kinds
There are many kind of pollution, and noise is one of them....
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Line 1, column 61, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “As” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...of pollution, and noise is one of them. As we know any kind of pollution is not al...
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Line 1, column 127, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: This
...lution is not allowed in a good society.This essay will discuss both sides, whether ...
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Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'research'.
Suggestion: Research
... turn a person violent and misbehaving. A research by School of Cognitive Ability showed t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 24.0651302605 33% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 41.998997996 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 1615.20841683 49% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 162.0 315.596192385 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.91358024691 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 4.20363070211 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74538034613 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 176.041082164 64% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.697530864198 0.561755894193 124% => OK
syllable_count: 251.1 506.74238477 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 4.76152304609 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.6673067936 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.5 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.25 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.38176352705 68% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 8.67935871743 12% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.147155799323 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0453491150259 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627889977527 0.0667982634062 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0924045670979 0.151304729494 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.07144271267 0.056905535591 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.8 13.0946893788 90% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.2 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 78.4519038076 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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