Some people argue that eating a balanced diet is the most important factor for a healthy life.
To what extent do you agree?
Undoubtedly, it is true that balanced diet provide essential minerals and vitamins to human body for keeping it fit and heals. Although, I am agree with this statement but in my opinion exercise and yoga also contribute a lot to live healthy.
To begin with, balanced diet is very important for our body due to plethora of reasons such as it enriches minerals, proteins, vitamins and amino acids as well sufficient amount of energy to human body. Firstly, all amino acids, minerals and vitamins provided by nutrition rich diet provides strength to body to fight against bacteria and stay away from diseases. our body, for example, require twenty amino acids from which only ten can be synthesized by it while the rest ten essential amino acids can be produced by balanced diet. Furthermore, balanced diet provides energy to body that is required to work by moving from one place to other. Consequently, nutrition rich food keep body fit and healthy.
On the other hand, the importance of exercise and yoga could not be neglected which regulate blood circulation in body as well as make it flexible. Generally speaking, proper regulation of blood in system helps the well-being to be active and energetic for a longer time and reduce the chances of cardiac problems and obesity. Moreover, body becomes flexible by engaging in work out activities and yoga. Last but not least, yoga helps to relax the mind and soul.
In conclusion, my personal prospective is that only balanced diet can not lead healthy life style. As exercises and yoga make the body much effective healthy and cope with health related issues.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, firstly, furthermore, if, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, it is true, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1344.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 271.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.9594095941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05734859645 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58556016947 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568265682657 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2499623909 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.384615385 106.682146367 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.8461538462 20.7667163134 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 14.8461538462 7.06120827912 210% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.134740381915 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0504282055634 0.084324248473 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0467243122502 0.0667982634062 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0897635378505 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0381557835121 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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