Write a letter to a friend telling him/her that you’re going back to your home town and you want to give him/her some furniture. Please say
– why you thought about him/her
– describe the furniture
– suggest a way for him/her to get it
Dear Mike,
Hope you are doing well. It has been a long time since we last met. I have a piece of great news to share that I have cleared the interview of a Public sector bank and will be joining them as an Information Technology specialist. The best part is that the posting for this role is in my hometown. I am really excited and looking forward to this opportunity as I always wanted to work in my hometown and stay with my parents.
I remember the last time you visited my apartment and wanted to buy a custom-made dining table and chairs for your new flat as you were low on budget. So I thought of informing you that I will be disposing of most of my items here in Sydney to save on my shipping cost. To elucidate I had recently bought one custom-made dining table with chairs from IKEA. It is a made of teak with carvings of Japanese art on its legs and the four sides moreover there are four fancy chairs which have leather and foam seats to give extra comfort while sitting.
Why don't you come over to my apartment on the coming weekend to have a look at the furniture?. I also have a local transporter who can ship to it your house.
I look forward to your immediate response.
Warm wishes
Brian
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 6, column 5, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...ive extra comfort while sitting. Why dont you come over to my apartment on the co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, look, moreover, really, so, well, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 26.3917525773 117% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 989.0 937.175257732 106% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.28138528139 4.54256449028 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.38994758898 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606060606061 0.622605031667 97% => OK
syllable_count: 315.0 290.88556701 108% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 16.3608247423 104% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.6356145155 44.8134815571 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.0769230769 76.5299724578 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7692307692 16.8248392259 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.46153846154 4.34317383033 80% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.102415770196 0.216113520407 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0357344150514 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0402142181278 0.0603063233224 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0602909766846 0.12726935374 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.025920871334 0.0580467560999 45% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.6 8.37731958763 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 71.14 70.7449484536 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 7.45979381443 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.25 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.21 7.59969072165 95% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 41.2886597938 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 8.54432989691 103% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.