The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The two maps illustrate the way to get a city hospital over a three-year period between 2007 and 2010
According to overall trend , there are some additional features that appear on the map of 2010 but not on 2007 . it appears that the city hospital has become a much more comfortable for drivers , with far more road and transport facilities.
One interesting change is that a new roundabout has been built , to connect the bus station and city road with the city hospital.In 2007 , there was not any bus station for people who is cured there what is more it constructed in South-west side of city hospital in 2010 . Another striking change is that the puclic car park replaced in north-east of city hospital . However, in this two maps , there have been two features that still remained . it is A city hospital and staff car park .
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- The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant 56
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, so, still, what is more
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.15609756098 190% => OK
Pronoun: 9.0 5.60731707317 161% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 33.7804878049 50% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 680.0 965.302439024 70% => OK
No of words: 146.0 196.424390244 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.65753424658 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.47606760199 3.73543355544 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56788183023 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 83.0 106.607317073 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.568493150685 0.547539520022 104% => OK
syllable_count: 205.2 283.868780488 72% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 1.0 4.33902439024 23% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 80.7788476163 43.030603864 188% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.333333333 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.3333333333 22.9334400587 106% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.16666666667 5.23603664747 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 16.0 1.69756097561 943% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258503197317 0.215688989381 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.126999370526 0.103423049105 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0513039248651 0.0843802449381 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187145381569 0.15604864568 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032129150242 0.0819641961636 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.2329268293 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 64.04 61.2550243902 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.04 11.4140731707 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.31 8.06136585366 91% => OK
difficult_words: 23.0 40.7170731707 56% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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