The booming of international tourism has spawned a host of boons in our lives. It is no exaggeration that the economy of a large amount of regions has been significantly revolutionized by tourism industry. Yet when it comes to whether this burgeoning industry is a blessing or a curse in terms of cultural communication. The incomprehensive and unbalanced perspectives of the tourists to other countries have been criticized as a violation of the original intention to broaden minds. To elaborate the causes of this existing predicament, there are three determining elements.
First and foremost, the limiting travelling modes confine the comprehension to the destinations. A majority of travellers have neither enough time nor financial support to deliberately tour another country. Hence this population tends to choose a cost-saving package from a travel agent. However, the routines have normally been fixed which allow only certain length of stay and limiting scenic sites. That is to say, even though those tourists have paid for an insight understanding to other cultures, they have been shown partial aspects of them.
Secondly, international tourism may also lead to prejudices between the tourists and residents in tour destinations. To begin with, the majority of international tourists on guided tours are not cultivated the concept to preview the customs and taboos of the visited countries before their trips. Their desire to explore the destination such as indigenous costumes and accessories worn by the natives may offend local people. In addition, the influx of tourists may be an intrusion upon the lives of many local inhabitants.
Thirdly, international backpackers can be very vulnerable to cheating, mugging or even terrorist attacks due to their unfamiliarity with the destination spots which finally contributes to the unbalanced views upon those countries. As for some developing countries, tourism has become the pillar industry with a great number of local citizens living their lives on tourism related work. Apart from those disciplined businessmen, the speculated ones may damage the impression of the country which eventually results in an incomprehensive perspective of the tourists.
To tackle this existing predicament, I believe that there are three advancements could be done. Firstly, tourists should be encouraged to travel in diversified methods. The traditional travel agencies should offer various and personalized plans to attract customers with specific requirements. Next, it is of great importance for tourists to take the initiative to get to know the customs of the destination. Before the journey, a well preparation about the culture and conventions is a beneficial way to avoid misunderstanding between tourists and the indigenous people. Last but not least, local governments should take further actions against the tourism related criminals which will definitely promise a sustainable tourism industry development.
In the final analysis, I concede that international tourism produces problems for different nations to understand their common humanity. However, with mutual sympathy and respect and necessary actions being taken, a culturally-sensitive sustainable tourism and a better understanding about other nations will be finally achieved.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Hence,
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Line 7, column 328, Rule ID: A_GREAT_NUMBER_OF_NN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'locals'?
Suggestion: locals
... pillar industry with a great number of local citizens living their lives on tourism ...
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...disciplined businessmen, the speculated ones may damage the impression of the countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, hence, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, apart from, as for, in addition, such as, to begin with, that is to say
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 71.0 41.998997996 169% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2819.0 1615.20841683 175% => OK
No of words: 495.0 315.596192385 157% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.69494949495 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.71684168287 4.20363070211 112% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.27090858558 2.80592935109 117% => OK
Unique words: 273.0 176.041082164 155% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.551515151515 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 883.8 506.74238477 174% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 11.0 2.52805611222 435% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 25.0 16.0721442886 156% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.3510152347 49.4020404114 80% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.76 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.04 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.104101474561 0.244688304435 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0310152304986 0.084324248473 37% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0299956314258 0.0667982634062 45% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0549284762381 0.151304729494 36% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0163795562593 0.056905535591 29% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.27 50.2224549098 70% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.72 12.4159519038 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.52 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 155.0 78.4519038076 198% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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