The line graph illustrates the amount of wheat exported in Australia, Canada and European Community over the period of five years, staring in 1985.
The line graph illustrates the amount of wheat exported in Australia, Canada and European Community over the period of five years, staring in 1985.
Looking at the graph, it is immediately clear that while European community registered an increase in the wheat exports, the opposite was true for Australia. Throughout the period, despite of significant fluctuations, Canada exported the largest amount of wheat in most years.
In 1985, the amount of wheat European community exported stood at around 17 million tonnes. It, then decreased to under 15 million tonnes one year later before a slight increase to exactly 15 million tonnes by 1988. However, over the last three years, a considerable increase was witnessed in wheat exports, and European community exported the largest amount of wheat out of three regions examined. By contrast, an opposite trend was seen in wheat exports in Australia. After a slight rise, it fell gradually form over 15 million tonnes to over 10 million tonnes by 1989, and remained unchanged at this level towards the end of the period.
Over the period, Canada experienced significant fluctuations, in 1985, about 19 million tonnes of wheat was exported. It declined slightly before resurging to 25 million tonnes in 1988, which is the highest point of the paragraph. However, the figure immediately fell steeply to under 15 million tones one year later. Finally, a rise of nearly 5 million tonnes was registered in the last year of the period.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 178, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... one year later before a slight increase to exactly 15 million tonnes by 1988. Ho...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
finally, however, if, look, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 33.7804878049 148% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1240.0 965.302439024 128% => OK
No of words: 241.0 196.424390244 123% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14522821577 4.92477711251 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.94007293032 3.73543355544 105% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6931410526 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 106.607317073 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.477178423237 0.547539520022 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 369.9 283.868780488 130% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 1.53170731707 196% => OK
Article: 7.0 4.33902439024 161% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 9.0 3.36585365854 267% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 22.4926829268 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.9775252516 43.030603864 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.333333333 112.824112599 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0833333333 22.9334400587 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 3.70975609756 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.445933451942 0.215688989381 207% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.204612745305 0.103423049105 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.26134209754 0.0843802449381 310% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.42296550617 0.15604864568 271% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.343505140692 0.0819641961636 419% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.2329268293 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.64 61.2550243902 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 10.3012195122 96% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 11.4140731707 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 51.0 40.7170731707 125% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.4329268293 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.9970731707 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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