Some people believe it is important to give gifts and presents to friends and family to show that we care about them. Others think that there are better ways to show affection to them. Discuss both the views and give your own opinion.
There are plenty of ways to show our love for our near and dear ones. Although, some people think that presenting gifts to our close ones is the greatest way to express our true care for them, others hold a different opinion and believe that there are other effective ways such as spending time with them and helping out them whenever they need to replace the former practice. This essay will analyze both viewpoints with examples to support the arguments and present my opinion later.
Exchanging gifts has been a long time tradition embedded within human history. People practicing this trend on different occasions such as birthdays, weddings and festivals believe that gifts are tangible and leave a remarkable impression about one's thoughts and care for loved ones. Presenting token of love to family and friends make them feel special. For example, sending surprise flowers and cakes on birthdays to geographically distant friends not only make their day but also make their relationship strong. Hence, gifts plays a significant role to express our care for others.
However, there are certain demographics of the society who consider materialistic happiness attained from gifts is short-lived. Moreover, economically weak people cannot afford such expensive gifts. Instead, spending time with family and friends and supporting each other lasts forever. For example, accompanying grandparents for a walk, grocery shopping or gardening, taking care of parents in sickness by cooking meal for them are such selfless deeds that fill their heart with joy and being cherished lifetime by them. Sparing our precious time for our dear ones is the small investment we can make to create a strong bonding in relationship. Therefore, aforementioned points substantiate that happiness achieved from such acts is far above than expensive gifts.
By hammering the final nail, I pen down by saying that spending time with buddies and relatives , and assisting them is more valuable than offering materialistic presents.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, hence, however, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1704.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 318.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35849056604 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22286093782 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73758724053 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 195.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.61320754717 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 509.4 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 68.0778639174 49.4020404114 138% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.6 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.06666666667 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.237829358549 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0730555157347 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0697089402464 0.0667982634062 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139365488488 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0873216597088 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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