You have a friend living in another country and he/she is curious to learn about your country
explain the major events that has occurred in your country
give your opinion about the events that you mention
ask your friend about the current events that are happening to his/her country
start with dear
Dear Grace,
I hope you are doing okay there. I am doing fine here in the Philippines. Recently Catriona Gray won the pageant of Miss Universe 2018. Most of us here in the Philippines are overjoyed because of what she had achieved.
I think she won because of here hard work and perseverance even though she did not win the Miss World back then. She did not lose hope, she continued to move forward, strive, and worked hard to achieved what she is today.
Also our country is in the midst of building a lot of highways, land-ports, and mass transportation system. Which could help us Filipinos in our daily lives. This project is one of the best that our government is implementing right now.
Grace, how are things doing there in Amsterdam? Are there any particular things you want to tell me? or you can tell me what are the current events happening in your country right now?
Okay, take care Grace and write back soon.
Best Wishes,
Bill
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Also,
... hard to achieved what she is today. Also our country is in the midst of building...
^^^^
Line 7, column 109, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Which” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...-ports, and mass transportation system. Which could help us Filipinos in our daily li...
^^^^^
Line 9, column 102, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Or
... particular things you want to tell me? or you can tell me what are the current ev...
^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, then, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 32.9175257732 67% => OK
Preposition: 16.0 26.3917525773 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 796.0 937.175257732 85% => OK
No of words: 170.0 206.0 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.68235294118 4.54256449028 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.78020617076 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45966774137 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 109.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.641176470588 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 234.9 290.88556701 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 3.0 0.463917525773 647% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.0786068612 44.8134815571 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 56.8571428571 76.5299724578 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1428571429 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.64285714286 4.34317383033 38% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121435807982 0.216113520407 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0360735819799 0.0766984524023 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0696620158243 0.0603063233224 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0575074261112 0.12726935374 45% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0686152072656 0.0580467560999 118% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.7 8.37731958763 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.98 8.71597938144 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.11 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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