Write a letter to your friend inviting on family party.
In the letter, you should:
what the activity is
what you planed
why it is important that your friend should come
Dear Sally,
Hi how are you doing there in Amsterdam? I am would like to invite you to a birthday party of my father this coming 27th of March 2019
This event will take place in our family house in Manila, Philippines. We prepared a lot activities especially sight seeing the mountains, visiting the museums and also go to the beach and enjoy the sun.
It is important that you should come to the party since that we have considered you as a part of our family. I think we should also continue the love that we missed in the few years that have past. I really missed you a lot and my family misses you so much.
If you made up your mind and agree to come to the party. Just give me a call or email me at bill@12345mail.com.
Okay, I look forward seeing you.
Best wishes,
Bill
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| 2019-07-20 | okaycanada1 | 73 | view |
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 32.9175257732 91% => OK
Preposition: 18.0 26.3917525773 68% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 650.0 937.175257732 69% => OK
No of words: 150.0 206.0 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.33333333333 4.54256449028 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.49963551158 3.78020617076 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4695118726 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 98.0 127.690721649 77% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.653333333333 0.622605031667 105% => OK
syllable_count: 196.2 290.88556701 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.8849632562 44.8134815571 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.0 76.5299724578 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.5 4.34317383033 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.24618059027 0.216113520407 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0918195687546 0.0766984524023 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0796988052709 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.117789506081 0.12726935374 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548895314435 0.0580467560999 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.5 8.37731958763 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 7.24 8.71597938144 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.59 7.59969072165 87% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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