In some countries employees are generally given two weeks of paid vacation time each year. In other countries employers are given four or six weeks of paid vacation time.
Considering the need of both employee and employer, what do you think is a reasonable amount of paid vacation time for employees to have? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience
Most of the countries have labour law and employers abide by the law that protects employee’s right. One of the rights that employees have is taking paid vacation during a year. While some countries secure four or six weeks of paid vacation time, I strongly think that 2 weeks of paid vacation would be enough for the employees in terms of productivity and expense.
First of all, longer than two week of paid vacation would have negative effect on productivity in workplace. If one leaves for vacation, the other workers should spare the workforce during the vacation. It would be even harder for the others to work things out when one employee takes too much time on vacation. In my case, I had a colleague in daycare who took 4 weeks of long vacation during the summer. The other employees including me had a hard time managing the classroom and taking care of children during the time even though we had a supply educator from outside. In this sense, it would be better to limit the paid vacation only for two weeks.
Secondly, the essential of business is making money. It is going to be huge burdens for employers to financially manage every employee’s longer paid vacation. For example, Daily Harold Korea once published an article that a company called bankrupt and one of its main reasons was spending tremendous budget on benefits for employees. If a worker needs more than two weeks of vacation, one can choose not to get paid once it goes over the paid period guaranteed by employers. Thus, giving two weeks paid vacation can save lots of money for business which focus on making profits.
In conclusion, employers follow the labour law that guarantees paid vacation for their employees. This essay discussed why short term of paid vacation has advantages over the long paid vacation. Giving two weeks paid vacation would be beneficial to both employees and employers.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'week' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'weeks'.
Suggestion: weeks
...ense. First of all, longer than two week of paid vacation would have negative ef...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for example, in conclusion, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1577.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.88235294118 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60522222742 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.529411764706 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 35.3428095495 49.4020404114 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7647058824 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.05882352941 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.390338038844 0.244688304435 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.138820776639 0.084324248473 165% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.102134636957 0.0667982634062 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.276058255792 0.151304729494 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0975919322042 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.81 8.58950901804 91% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 78.4519038076 84% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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