You have been offered a job that will require you to move to a city that you have never visited before. You have an acquaintance who lives there.
Write a letter to the acquaintance. In your letter
•explain your situation
•say why you feel unsure about living in the city
•ask some question about life in the city.
Dear Mike,
Hey, how is it going there? It has been years since I saw you last time when you visited Korea. Actually I am planning to move into Toronto soon because I finally got a job offer there. I am quite pleased that I can meet you finally in Toronto, but at the same time, I feel pretty unsure about the life there without family. As you know, it is my first time living in a foreign country and it took me a while to decide whether I leave all the things behind. I have a bunch of questions about living in Toronto before I move in terms of housing and food. How much would it be if I rent a one bed room apartment in downtown? Is there any Korean market I could buy some Korean food? Is it cheaper to cook rather than buying food as a single person? Thank you for the answers in advance and I hope to see you soon!
Your friend,
Koko
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, finally, first, if, so, while, i feel, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.03092783505 66% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 677.0 937.175257732 72% => OK
No of words: 169.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.00591715976 4.54256449028 88% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60555127546 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.0276959131 2.54303337028 80% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.680473372781 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 220.5 290.88556701 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.980660433 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9 16.8248392259 100% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.2 4.34317383033 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.29896907216 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 7.41237113402 40% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.300661240431 0.216113520407 139% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0955102778039 0.0766984524023 125% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.095068926324 0.0603063233224 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.286084201732 0.12726935374 225% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0580467560999 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.9 8.37731958763 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 5.68 8.71597938144 65% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.39 7.59969072165 84% => OK
difficult_words: 21.0 41.2886597938 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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