Health experts say that obese women and women over the age of 40 should not be given free fertility treatment (IVF) because they are more likely to experience health problems.
To what extent do you agree or disagree with this view?
The health is very essential in every one's life and today the problem of obesity is increasing day by day not only in children but in adults. It is adhered that the females with fat and older age do not allowed to do fertility treatment as the danger of health related anarchies might increase . In my opinion this statement is true for some reasons that I intend to discuss in upcoming paragraphs.
To embark with, the women with these conditions may face difficulties because firstly they are not healthy enough to hold a baby as their immunity weakened due to increased age and if they do so then the chances of survival of both mother and child get reduced. For instance, I heard a news recently from my uncle that a lady in their neighbourhood died because of her artificial pregnancy in elder age. Afterwards, the obese ladies have a overweight body can not give birth to a active and healthy baby as they ownself are victims of many diseases like diabetes, blood sugar and so on thus percentage of successful delivery is very low. I am not saying that these people can not have any child many alternatives might be helpful in that situation.
Furthermore, parents with these sorts of problems can adopt a child from orphanage where they can fulfill the requirements of needy juveniles and also gain happiness of having a offspring . Take my maternal aunt as instance, she is 45 years old and familier with all the consequences of IVF so they bring a small kid from the orphanage. By this they can gain pleasure and the danger of death might be overcomed.
In conclusion, I think that if the cure leads to pain then this would not be permitted to anyone because the life is our first priority than any other thing.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, if, may, so, then, thus, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1421.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.62866449511 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61074602465 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 181.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.589576547231 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 52.8467298847 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 129.181818182 106.682146367 121% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9090909091 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.5454545455 7.06120827912 149% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.208796004793 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.072215872853 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0471916138001 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111232321021 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0405170338433 0.056905535591 71% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.53 50.2224549098 105% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.87 12.4159519038 79% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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