Some people think that high salary is important when choosing a company to work for, while others think that a good working atmosphere is more important. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Organisations the world over, owe it a duty to ensure proper remuneration, which commensurate the work-done of its employee and also provide a safe and enabling work environment. Some people consider how handsome this salary is when accepting offers of employment, while others, however, consider companies that provide a good working atmosphere more importantly. I strongly support the latter view when choosing a company to work for.
Those who make a decision to work for a company because of its high salary may argue that this would make job seekers become richer than their counterparts in the early days of their career. For instance, in Nigeria, an average fresh graduate seeks to work in an oil-producing firm like Shell incorporation, which will make such graduate a millionaire in a short while. The huge benefit of this is that such graduate becomes the bread-winner of their families and be more reckoned with in the society. As a result, working for a company with higher remuneration gives access to luxury living.
However, I would argue that the above is not sustainable, and a positive work environment is more important and dependable. This is because it does not only ensure balance work-life but also develops through training and development on the career path. For example, I chose my current company because of its flexible work time, giving me a chance to spend quality time with family. Also, rigorous training overseas has exposed me to nominations for world-class business events. If I had not been part of a positive working environment, I would not have been able to represent my country in an international business summit.
In conclusion, while choosing a high salary company might be life-changing, the decision to join the one that has a good working atmosphere is more sustainable and dependable, in my view is paramount.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, so, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1561.0 1615.20841683 97% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11803278689 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9918531323 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 505.8 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.0567644562 49.4020404114 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 120.076923077 106.682146367 113% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4615384615 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07692307692 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.346736184946 0.244688304435 142% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.129006909563 0.084324248473 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0922242113104 0.0667982634062 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.229918458619 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0785173962725 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.4 13.0946893788 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 50.2224549098 79% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.71 12.4159519038 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.07 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 9.78957915832 143% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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