Advertising, which has been devised to sort out a problem of mass production today, is a subject of many debates concerning the robust evaluation of its impacts on consumers. Although it has been thought that it should be prohibited in all forms due to the downsides ascribed to, I’m of opinion that its merits override its demerits in serving both consumer and society, and this trend needs to undergo a change. I will assert my conviction regarding the matter shortly.
To begin with. Prohibiting all types of advertisements wouldn’t be to the benefits of consumers. Consumers reap the manifold benefits of advertisement simply because it not only educates people on giving information about various products available on the market but also raises the standard of living of people by drawing their attention to different variety and better quality products. This provides consumers with a clue as to how well to spend their money on high quality goods under different brand names. If it wasn’t for advertisement, we would remain ignorant about recent technological advances. So although advertisements may influence our decision to buy the things we don’t really need or to steer our better judgment away from the truth, their help for the betterment of our life surpass their presumed drawbacks.
Secondly, to add more to its credit, advertising is advantageous to society by reducing the cost of many services and creating more employment opportunities. By increasing the demand for goods, it increases the number of buyers and the number of workers needed to produce the goods therefore it reduces the cost and provides employment respectively. This results in booming the economy and flourishing the society in long run.
Overall. Although advertising is intrusive while we are surfing on the internet or watching a movie on television, it shouldn’t be eliminated from society as it paves the way to the economic development of society as whole and individuals in particular.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, really, regarding, second, secondly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, in particular, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 320.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.321875 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22948505376 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08546080179 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6125 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4999909246 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 131.0 106.682146367 123% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6153846154 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.23076923077 7.06120827912 131% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146175787931 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0470554637015 0.084324248473 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0522126722052 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0814783227185 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0295422716017 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 13.0946893788 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.87 12.4159519038 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.