Each year, the crime rate increases.
What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
In recent years, the world has seen an alarming increase in the number of crimes at the hands of not only adults but even teenagers. The urgency of practical solutions for this matter truly hits home. This essay will outline a number of possible causes for this trend, and a number of solutions to help tackle this issue.
There are two primary reasons relating to the high rate of crime. First of all, due to a wide range of cruel contents on social media, youth crime has been on the rise. Young adults have been exposed to a variety of brutal computer games as well as criminal news from an early age. This is fist where the danger lies. But for the proper supervision from parents and school, children would be gradually addicted to virtual life and imitate the acts of outrageous cruelty in video games. Secondly, it is material desire which leads an array of criminals to end up with malpractice. Those people seem to find illegal business as the best way to make loads of money quickly and effortlessly.
However, several measures can be taken to mitigate this pressing problem. It is essential to act with discretion when it comes to juvenile delinquency. Children may be still not implicitly aware of their illegal actions, thus we should comb through their backgrounds and stories. In this way, we would be able to draw each situation a substantive solution predicated on their own trouble instead of what type of crime they offended. Those may be derived from either inappropriate parenting or lack of childcare. In addition, manner education plays a key role in the endeavour to cut the crime rate. The youth ought to comprehend the repercussions of illegal acts as well as perceive a proper attitude towards money.
In conclusion, owing to the arguments mentioned above, it is my personal belief that one of the feasible strategies to address this matter is to invest in young generations.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, still, thus, well, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 41.998997996 131% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1588.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84146341463 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62138394317 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 207.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.631097560976 0.561755894193 112% => OK
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.0695915156 49.4020404114 73% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.2222222222 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.2222222222 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.83333333333 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 13.0 3.9879759519 326% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235605344146 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0599959363377 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0544232870346 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113064363812 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0546450032477 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.0946893788 80% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.79 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.67 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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