Each year, the crime rate increases. What are the causes of crime and what could be done to prevent this rise in criminal activity?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
crime rate has increased on an unprecedented scale in our present era. From my perspective, this trend appears to be because of the wide distance between the rich and the poor and the rise in drug consumption. some optimal solutions should be to strengthen some strict drugs-punishments, give employment opportunities or build more houses for destitute citizens and launch campaigns in schools.
criminality, despite stemming from plenty of reasons, its main causes which directly influence the increase in crime rate are societal issues, destitution and drugs. having difficult conditions, the poor who are unable to engage in schools will lack knowledge. therefore, there is little chance of those people having stable jobs in order to raise their families or even themselves while the rich are enjoying their lavish lifestyle. thus, it gives rise to a wide gap between the rich and the poor, with many citizens being more inclined towards committing crimes. For instance, some people resort to steeling others’money and property for their survival. Furthermore, being one of the most serious problems inherent in our lives, drugs which has an increase in consumption make many offenders who are addicted tend to commit crimes or even murders in order to steal money for their demand in drugs.
The government should invest much budget and effort in improving their citizens’lives. strengthening strict punishments can act as a deterrent to drugs-related offenders and potential criminals. Other solutions are to build more houses for destitute citizens and develop employment chances in undeveloped areas. Another effective measure is to launch campaigns in schools which educate students to avoid committing crimes and share experience by ex-prisoners. this method could allow the youth to easily know stories and imagine a shocking environment in prisons, thus it might positively influence their thoughts and discourage them from breaking the laws. As a result, crime rate will diminish soon.
In conclusion, criminality which appears not only in undeveloped nations but also in developing and developed areas is an urgent issue nowadays. Nevertheless, some measures which have been carried out to stop the speed of increasing crime rate are not very effective. therefore, the government should highlight this problem and spend much time and money on mitigating it.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, nevertheless, so, then, therefore, thus, while, for instance, in conclusion, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 19.0 10.4138276553 182% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2041.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 368.0 315.596192385 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.54619565217 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37987740619 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.04564048775 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.595108695652 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 619.2 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.3750468256 49.4020404114 96% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.388888889 106.682146367 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4444444444 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.44444444444 7.06120827912 91% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.151518324595 0.244688304435 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0482873388916 0.084324248473 57% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363880081617 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0971419573132 0.151304729494 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.023549666168 0.056905535591 41% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.91 12.4159519038 120% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.43 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.