Tourism is an ever growing industry.
What benefits do you think tourism brings to individuals and society.
Many transportation options are available nowadays due to the ever growing tourism industries. I believe tourism not only brings prosperity to society by introducing new cultures but also helps regional economies. Thus, individuals get benefited.
Tourism industry has becoming trendy in term of welcoming new ideas which foreigners have. This helps societies to adapt and accept new beliefs which come along with tourist from the different corners of the world. It also encourages local people to remove and forget old and rudimentary superstitions as this might not be the case in tourist respective counties. For example, Indian societies learn so many things which helps them to improve their life standards. Indian’s today’s generation also eliminated some superstitious beliefs by their ancestors which helps them to work without considering illogical orthodox rules. This example clearly clarifies how tourists change the societies life standards.
Tourism industry also helps to boost economy of particular region which in turn helps individuals to live better life by availing better options for their family. Many of the world cities nowadays totally backed by tourism industry. Most taxi drivers, local shop keepers and tourism agents runs their business on the basis of influx of foreigners. For instance, Economy of Goa one of the region of India completely supported by tourists. Many of the city’s hotel owners, private transportation agents and shopping centres are running on tourist. The aforementioned reasons clearly states the individuals economical benefit from the tourism industry.
To conclude, tourism industry could be helpful in both the case of individuals as well as societies’ development. Tourism industry are becoming undisputed industry for several countries and if this continues then it will become main source of income for individuals who resides in the country.
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'societies'' or 'society's'?
Suggestion: societies'; society's
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Message: Probable usage error. Use 'and' after 'both'.
Suggestion: and
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, for example, for instance, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1642.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 288.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.70138888889 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11953428781 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94548428966 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.59375 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.5259541795 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.5882352941 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.9411764706 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.35294117647 7.06120827912 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193434389893 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0723193797328 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0747865832528 0.0667982634062 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.141345098597 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0786132841289 0.056905535591 138% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.9 13.0946893788 106% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.31 50.2224549098 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.48 12.4159519038 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.31 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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